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Re: The Shadow's Fall
Well, TheProviant here, going to review! Okay, wow. After reading this I said to myself "that's pretty heavy!" I mean, unlike Anabelle, I have seen very few stories where a ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: Chapter One - Saved
Hello! Proviance is coming in for the review! This seems like a good story, no run-ons, and any grammar mistakes that I normally find when reading weren't there, so good ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: Lance
TheProviant here, reviewing. Wow. Just wow. I mean, I think I overlooked any grammatical errors (sorry, hopefully someone else could help with that), and just read the story. It was ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: diagonal toppings
Hello! TheProviant is here to review! Now, for those who don't understand, freewriting is the art of just picking up a pencil or pen and writing whatever comes to mind. ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: House of Night: Chapter 1: Third Person
I liked how you lured the reader in at the beginning. It was very effective, something that all writers strive for. Now, something I noticed is that she seems to ...
Jul 6, 2014