ThePenultimateGinger

ThePenultimateGinger here with a review! Let's start out with the nice things: I really like how you opened up with a quick rundown on the main character, Annie. Some people ...

Does this count as a review? I'm counting it as a review. This poem is rad as hell, I just. Waving my arms around frantically right now. Even Grammarly couldn't ...

Hey! PenultimateGinger here with a review. At least, a review on the first part of your story, I'm limited on time but I'll likely be back. So anyway, the first ...

Hello! Ginger here with a review. Not too many suggestions, this poem shows mastery in pretty much all categories! It's powerful adjectives, clever rhythm, and smooth similes demonstrate a strong ...

Good afternoon! ThePenultimateGinger here with a review! I noticed when "Oh, man! The old man's alive! Now what about my property!" was stated, I felt a bit confused at who ...

Most of what I have to add has been said below, uses of "very" and some redundancy slow the reader (ew i sound like a rubric what have i become), ...

Hey! So overall, great imagery, but there are some grammatical errors I'd suggest fixing: First off, the "in" in "in this moment" would sound a whole lot smoother if it ...

Thank you for translating this (I feel very blessed now, lmao.) It's gorgeous, and I agree, it does still hold its form and rhythm very well. I loved how you ...

Nice poem about change and confusion! I loved the rhythm, and it's very real and "solid," if you get what I mean. This is very lyrical, and would be fantastic ...

Oh dang, this isn't inaccurate. I love the rhythm and twist on the rhyming pattern, "When you're a young little child, who dreams all day long. A small tiny child, ...

nonononononononononononononono this is a lot of emotion for me to be feeling over something that isn't canon I loved this but also kinda loathed it (in a good way!) This ...

I love this! It's very relatable, and you get the point across just fine without capitalization. I've never seen an acrostic poem that was actually serious and not just some ...

Agree with RowannaLynn, "heavy wind" is a bit nondescript. Otherwise, very nice read, could set it to music and would sound genuine, definitely what one looks for in a poem. ...

Bit clunky, but with a few combs through grammarly I think it’ll be fine! It took me a second to realize that the times switched from 3040 to 3080 but ...

Some basic grammar errors, but judging by the level of the writing I’m assuming they’re just run of the mill mistakes. Nothing too major:) I would personally add an introduction, ...