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  • Other » General, General Re: Grandiose Start of Nothing

    I really like this. It made me smile a bit. It's kinda like " I don't care what people think, I'm gonna express my self. And I'll do it the ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Treasure Passed

    I really really like this poem of yours! It's short, sweet, and beautiful. :) I love how you appreciate life and nature and express it in your work for the ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Lesson In Love

    I really really like this! It's beautiful! It makes me emotional; and I'm sure alot of people can relate to this. It's touching, even. And I love how you added ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Should I keep writing this?

    You should continue! I loved this! It's a story many can relate to, includeing myself. I notice you don't all your stories, though you shouldnt! You good! We all have ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Life

    I love this story! It's touching and beautiful! I like how you used " you " instead of "I" or "he" it's different in a spectacular way. It's like an ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Chains.

    Another fantastic story!! I love the topic of racism you chose. Its a topic that I feel needs to be addressed more. All men created equal is one of my ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: And that would be a lie...

    I really liked this! You wrote a story that many girls can relate to. I like how you made it more personal to the character by haveing it in her ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Into Thin Air - Chapter One (REVISED VERSION AS OF 4/1/11)

    I loved your story! I liked the way you discribed the general day of the princess, also added some foreshadowing factors as you did so. I loved how you went ...

    Jan 26, 2011


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— Charm