ThePatchworkPilgrims

Hey Rosewood :) Thank you again for another great review. We'll definitely perma-include you in our posts now when publishing the next parts ;-) Regarding the voices in this MC's ...

Thank you for the review fleural :) Regarding the quotation marks- we are aware the norm in contemporary literature is double quotation marks, but there are also several authors (most ...

We're always happy to be of assistance. We on the other hand always hit a metaphorical wall, where we'll leave our chapters for months at a time, and then come ...

Hey Buranko. We are actually one physical body, with several people (we have a disorder known as OSDD, which basically one of the two disorders that used to be called ...

Hey Stormblessed, thank you for your review :) With regards to the apostrophe/quotation marks, we wrote dialogue more as a stylistic reason than anything else (essentially, we noted that several ...

Hey WaterSprout, thank you for your review :) We really don't take offence easily, so no need to apologise for any critique ;-) We agree with you that a prologue ...

Thank you for the review Rosewood :D We capitalized them more for ourselves so we could remember their defining features, especially since some of them do become prominent in later ...

Thank you very much for the review MJ :-) I always appreciate constructive criticism, and I have already edited the grammatical and lexical points you indicated to me. Would you ...

@jessiebear, all the words that you thought were incorrect (thus those you sought to correct), are spells, with the exception of Salajine, which I explained in the A/N at the ...

I have added you to my list of people to tag once I post the next chapter! ;-)

@CatRose17, thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked the prologue, and hope to see more of your reviews for the following parts as well. (I have a very ...

Hey Ty! Thanks for the great review! You've actually given me something to work with, and given me a new perspective on this poem. The four points you made were ...

Well, the concept of bleeding someone white can have several implications, as it can be seen that by making them bleed, you are actually purifying them. It also has a ...

Thanks Tigerlily!! Have a great day too!

You and your randomosities...