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TheOneNamedZoe

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Chapter Two

    The god years will be in the appendix

    Sep 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Chapter Two

    Thank you once again! And this, I will add, is the reason descriptions are quite vague at the start. You should follow along and then learn more, grow up like ...

    Sep 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Chapter one

    Thank you again for another amazing review! I would have included the flashbacks, as they are an interesting idea; but, as they grow up, things change. Drastically to where their ...

    Sep 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    And also yesss review the other two

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    And by the way, yes. I prefer Zoe

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    Mysterious*

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    Also, descriptions are farther implied in chapter one. The gods are meant to come off as serious. (In my edit, they are all wearing cloaks of black and white.)

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Chapter one

    I would do that but as I said (will say because I need to add an extra reply) more is explained as the chapters move on, more is built up, ...

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    I am actually severely editing this prologue in word and have not updated it yet. I think I'm going to close reviews for the prologue until then. It's not that ...

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    At the very end of the book, I am planning to make an appendix where any future aterisks will be seen and an open Q & A. Also, thank you ...

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Chapter Two

    Thank you soooo much! The comma thing only implies if it's not an exclamatory or interrogatory statement. But thank you! I'm glad to see you enjoyed it! I hope you ...

    Sep 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    Thank you for reviewing. I definitely will be editing this work. And as for the mystery, that is the point. It is a prologue and you are meant to know ...

    Sep 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    I already used Grammarly for this ;^^

    Sep 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Chapter Two

    *poke*

    Sep 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Chapter one

    Thank you for mentioning the duplicate. That was likely an error on my copying and pasting from Word. As for the Dark room..... Well, I'm not gonna spoil anything. >:3

    Sep 11, 2016


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