TheOffBroadwayAuthor

Thanks for the review! I'll look over those lines and put breaks in. As for Scottish Joe, he's a foreign entity that Joenitor brought in to evaluate Joe, hence the ...

Thanks for the review! I'll fix that mistake. The Scottish Joe was super random, my dad came up in the middle of me writing and said "what if there was ...

Joe doesn't have multiple personality disorder. The "alters" are just the personification of different facets of his personality, and they get up to shenanigans while he's asleep. They didn't really ...

Thank you for the review!

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Good job with this poem! I know a lot of people who fit this description, including myself. We want to hide the bad parts of ourselves and show the great ...

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Good job with this poem! I know a lot of people who fit this description, including myself. We want to hide the bad parts of ourselves and show the great ...

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Good job with this poem! I know a lot of people who fit this description, including myself. We want to hide the bad parts of ourselves and show the great ...

Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you liked it

Thank you for the review! The whole "lens" thing was a reference to this thing my OCD does where I can't hear what I'm doing right and I think I'm ...

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it

Thank you! And yes, you guessed it, Ludia is the female version of Ludwig. I'll take a look at that ending with what you said in mind.

Thanks for your critique! To explain the prodigious ability, Ludia has Acquired Savant Syndrome from her head injury. (Her head trauma also causes the hearing loss, anxiety, and depression.) I ...

Thank you! I can see what you mean about the flow of the poem. I'll take a look at that.