TheGreatIthy

You have no idea how happy I am to be seeing this Ode after just talking about in chat not even an hour ago! Good job! :)

I know it's a classic, but I didn't enjoy Lord of the Flies that much. Mainly because I didn't feel anything when something bad happened to one of the characters. ...

*Stands up with a slow clap* Just amazing. Brought a tear to my eye! In a good way, of course.

It's comments like that that makes me wish I found this website earlier! Thank you so much for your time on the review! Obviously I can't change much for this ...

He's a man. And don't worry, if you don't know, then maybe others won't either. Maybe it's my fault and I didn't make it clear enough. I'll go through the ...

Thank you for the input, and I will probably fix it before the next post. Especially the errors with knowing who is talking when. I just got on, so I ...