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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: [deleted]

    I'm right with dante93 on this one. I usually flip out about punctuation in poems, but the lack of it here helps it flow better. Amazing work you've created here! ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The beast of poor

    Hello, I'm Bryan, I will be your reviewer for this afternoon. OK, for starters, there were a LOT of spelling errors. And a few grammatical mistakes (which I understand is ...

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Tormented Thoughts in n Insane Girl's Brain

    I know I'll never know what goes on in a teenage girls brain. This "poem" just backs up my hypothesis. Please take this as constructive criticism. I hate this. It ...

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Calling all Critiques/ Reviews!!!!! Lucifer

    How true this is! I really like this one, because its so easy to relate to. He comes to all of us at one time or another, but you have ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Deleted

    Hey there, lets get right down to reviewing this Positives -I really like your descriptions of certain scenes and people such as: I cowered in my room and listened as ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Haunted Mill

    Hello there, I suppose it's time to review this bad boy. I honestly thought this was just another story of little kids getting into trouble and then the scolding from ...

    Apr 23, 2011


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