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Re: [deleted]
I'm right with dante93 on this one. I usually flip out about punctuation in poems, but the lack of it here helps it flow better. Amazing work you've created here! ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: The beast of poor
Hello, I'm Bryan, I will be your reviewer for this afternoon. OK, for starters, there were a LOT of spelling errors. And a few grammatical mistakes (which I understand is ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Tormented Thoughts in n Insane Girl's Brain
I know I'll never know what goes on in a teenage girls brain. This "poem" just backs up my hypothesis. Please take this as constructive criticism. I hate this. It ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Calling all Critiques/ Reviews!!!!! Lucifer
How true this is! I really like this one, because its so easy to relate to. He comes to all of us at one time or another, but you have ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Hey there, lets get right down to reviewing this Positives -I really like your descriptions of certain scenes and people such as: I cowered in my room and listened as ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: The Haunted Mill
Hello there, I suppose it's time to review this bad boy. I honestly thought this was just another story of little kids getting into trouble and then the scolding from ...
Apr 23, 2011