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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Rat

    This was a really good read, and a really interesting story. It was definitely worth the read. The plot was well thought out and put together nicely. I really thought ...

    May 19, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: Little girl

    Interesting story. I have to say I found it quite disturbing and was appalled by this character. That doesn't mean this was a bad story. Actually this anti-heroism could make ...

    May 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Coda - Prologue

    Thus was a nice story. I really enjoyed the action in it. I do suggest that you maybe use a little more detail within the action because some scenes, I ...

    May 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Instant: Prologue

    Very exciting story. I loved the way you emphasized on her internal emotions of fear and desperation of the character. It really brought detail to the story that it would ...

    May 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Dragon and the Princess: Chap. 1

    This was great! I'm a big fan of fantasy stories so this was really interesting to me. I admit that I dont know a whole lot about the show Fairy ...

    May 5, 2015


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