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Re: The Rat
This was a really good read, and a really interesting story. It was definitely worth the read. The plot was well thought out and put together nicely. I really thought ...
May 19, 2015 -
Re: Little girl
Interesting story. I have to say I found it quite disturbing and was appalled by this character. That doesn't mean this was a bad story. Actually this anti-heroism could make ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: Coda - Prologue
Thus was a nice story. I really enjoyed the action in it. I do suggest that you maybe use a little more detail within the action because some scenes, I ...
May 5, 2015 -
Re: Instant: Prologue
Very exciting story. I loved the way you emphasized on her internal emotions of fear and desperation of the character. It really brought detail to the story that it would ...
May 5, 2015 -
Re: The Dragon and the Princess: Chap. 1
This was great! I'm a big fan of fantasy stories so this was really interesting to me. I admit that I dont know a whole lot about the show Fairy ...
May 5, 2015
