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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Righteous Will - Part 2

    Yes, I do see what you mean by that statement. I suppose the qualifiers were a bit embedded in my own brain. I'll have to do something there.

    Jun 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Righteous Will - Part 2

    I am simply indicating to the reader that Vanaman makes other vampires uncomfortable, but that there's really nothing they can do about it. I don't really see how that limits ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Righteous Will - Part 2

    Even if Vanaman is not liked, he is the favorite of one of the scariest vampires around and is himself quite scary. But also, he is the host of the ...

    Jun 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Righteous Will - Part 1

    I don't have any deep-seated reason for delay, and was planning on doing it soon. I just like to describe things when I feel they have a value to the ...

    Jun 15, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Righteous Will - Part 1

    Yoda: Thank you for your comments, both praise and suggestions, as usual. Interms of the vampire issue, a few things: First of all, originality is not my primary goal. I ...

    Jun 14, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Righteous Will - Part 1

    Karstan, Thank you for your considerate review. I think it reveals large, ideological differences between us concerning the nature of writing in general. I don't really consider names such as ...

    Jun 14, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Righteous Will - Part 2

    I have to apologize, and recant a statement I made before. When I write this on word I have a space in the prose which appears as a break, but ...

    Jun 14, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Righteous Will - Part 1

    Lily: Thank you for your careful, pleasant review. First of all, nightweb is not refering to the stars. This will be explained later. The nightweb is a spell which holds ...

    Jun 14, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Beowulf Project Part 1

    For Lethero: Geats are the people of Beowulf. hence, Geatish. Also, the "dangerous It" passage was, as you deduced, merely a typo: should be a period. BigBadBear: This is not ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Roadwork

    The mistake most of you are making is that I have anything to say. Maybe I do, maybe I don't. But literature isn't always a handout. I could tell you ...

    Mar 26, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Roadwork

    It is a vexation. The problem the main character faces is vexatious. Obviously, the piece is allegorical. Pervasively so. The allegory isn't exactly spelled out, but. They shouldn't be, methinks.

    Mar 25, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Roadwork

    I was speaking to the reader, yes. And the story which follows has everything to do with what's said. The story isn't self-evident; I don't mean it to be. Not ...

    Mar 25, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Roadwork

    The piece is complete.

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Hard, Cold Facts

    It's not pointless. I never write anything pointless. I'm not saying it's deep or fantastic or magnificent, but it's not pointless. And if it's nothing other than enjoyable, so what? ...

    Feb 25, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Hard, Cold Facts

    Thanks for the reviews. Certainly, I am pleased that you found this funny, but there is something serious here as well. Ezra Pound is famous for his two-lined poem. Tell ...

    Feb 23, 2008


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