TheCrimsonLady

Huh. Weird. Didn't ever mean to comment, blank or not.

Thanks for all your reviews! Chapters 29 and 30 are actually done- they're just not posted, because I'm too lazy to do so.

Thanks, Ryd, for both reviews! Lovely feedback~

Thanks so much for the review! No, I don't hate you :P, but I would like to point something out- the 'Piper' I wrote about isn't... exactly the Pied Piper. ...

Thanks for the review.

Thanks, Reine. Honestly, I know my chapters are getting worse each week, but I'm not going to drop out of LMS yet. But you might find the next ones disheartening, ...

Thanks, reine!

Thanks, Rosey!

Thanks, reine, quite helpful!

Thanks, Noe!

Thank you for your review! To explain a bit, the poem is about dying, how you're slowly distanced from everyone before you inevitably die.

Thank you.

Rydia! All your points as very, very, helpful! About the men thing- I should make this more clear, I think- she's saying that trusting him with what amount to her ...

Thanks!