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Re: Ill Fated Love- Chapter 3
Hey, love! Aurora here for a quick review. Let's start off with technicalities first, yes? "Damn Pierce! Did you not see the sock?" He yelled blatantly frustrated. "Damn, Pierce! Did ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Signs of Summer
Hi love! Aurora here for a quick review! The green room must stay cleared! Oh my god. I love this. It's bitter, harsh, has a lot of death and violence... ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: The Roads of Marceris Ch.10 (2/2)
Hello, love! Aurora here for a Review day review! On that note... Happy review day! Now, down to business. I haven't been doing grammar and spelling, so lets start off ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Pact, Chapter One, Part Two
Hello, love! Aurora here fro a Review day Review!!! Now, let's start. I won't be pointing out any grammatical errors, simply because I think you can do that on your ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Globetrotters Chapter 7 - Going Home
Hi love! Aurora here for a quick Review Day review! Let's get down to business, yes? Oh, that rhymes! God, this was LONG chapter. Honestly, I'd suggest splitting it up ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 5: The Academy
Hello, artemis! Aurora here for a Review day review! Alright, down to business. First thing that caught my attention: Split this chapter up. It's so long, really, that you could ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 10
Hello, love. Aurora here for a review day review. Alright, so let's start before my coffee wears off and I get snappy. Because really, who does that help? Don't answer ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: A Guide To Males - Lesson 3: Brother
Hello, love! Aurora here for a review day review! Alright, to business now: The very first paragraph strikes me as odd. Here's a regular teenage girl, and she thinks like ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Siege, Chapter two: Failure (part 3/3)
Hello, love! Aurora here for a Review day review! Alright. Let's start. There are a lot of technical errors in this piece that I am NOT going to point out. ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Siege, Chapter two:Failure (part 2/3)
Hello, love! Aurora here for a Review day review! Yay! Okay, I'm pretty sure you can tell I'm running on coffee and chocolate. I'm sorry, It's 2:30. AM. Alright, let's ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 9 part 2; Ky, A Skip
Hello, love! Aurora here for a Review Day review! Alright, so let's start off with technicalities. Oh wait... there were none...that I caught. I'm in a hurry, though, so I ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 9 Part 2
Hello,,love! Aurora here for a review. Hmm, let's see I'm not going to critique your grammar or any other technicalities. Alright. In this chapter, I can see a lot of ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Three Hearts: Part 1 : Chapter 1
Hello, love! Aurora here for a quick review! Alright, so I have one big concern with this. I like the description you have given us, but you don't need to ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Twelfth Night: Chapter Five
Hello, love! Aurora here for a review. :) I like what you're doing here. I have not read your previous chapters, but I know twelfth night very well. Surprisingly enough, ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: A Torn Kingdom: Chapter Four
Hello! Aurora here for a review! Okay, I just have to say: There are definitely positive things about this piece. I mean, yeah, some of the grammar and spelling and ...
Jun 19, 2014