TheCountChristian

I like this..The way you've put together multiple situations which we all face in life...it's just awesome.Still, to me the best part is that after reading this you simply have ...

First of all, I just love this. It's so epic. I think I've never seen or read anything like this so..good job :) Even though some have complaints about grammar ...

I've cut out the "actually"..I knew I would make some random noob mistake, and I'm not surprised...this is my first time I did anything like this (posting my work online) ...

Thank you for pointing out my mistakes...I'm sure I wouldn't get it myself...about the world will be, as planned, closely explained in the following chapters. And the characters too. I ...