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Re: Utopia
Very sad ending and well written the words flow across the page. Very good hook at the beginning it made me want to keep reading and see what made the ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: The Ring i found next to a yellow sea
Very very nice i love every thing about this story it is very well written and i love the story. All personal opinions aside the decisions that the main character ...
Oct 13, 2014 -
Re: Three Short Tales
Very well done at the beginning of each story you a pretty good attention grabber that gets the reader interested and want to read each of the stories. The stories ...
Oct 13, 2014 -
Re: This Must Be the Place
Love how you started it as littlefox says very attention grabbing it gets the reader interested and wanting to read more of the story. Good writing it flows across the ...
Oct 13, 2014