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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Ash

    Hola:) Review as requested! My first impression of this was cool. As a writer that likes to attack my readers with unnecessary amounts of description, I've come to really appreciate ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hollow Bones

    Well, this was going to be a review reciprocating the great one you bestowed upon me, but after reading this poem, I realized I was sorta beaten to the punch. ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: "Of Mice And Men" Comparison Essay

    Bunny here to review! Thank you for the request, and I'll try not to disappoint. ;) First, I'll just give my over all thoughts. Despite a few random typos (those ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: 101 Things I Want to Do before I Die

    Ahoy. :3 I really love reading things likes this since it gives some surprising insight about people. (And they're easy and entertaining, but that doesn't sound as fancy.) Basically, I'm ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Old Man in the Street

    Hello. :} I really enjoyed this piece. I think the length is perfect, and the story is so delicate and touching. As other reviewers have noted (I won't bore you ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: 13 (Chapt. 1)

    Hiya:) Just thought I'd return a review. As I am a sucker for this kind of story--war, imposing government, teenage rebellion, the works--I perked up upon beginning this. Now for ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: My Average Day

    This is a very interesting idea you've got going. I like that you're taking risks with format and style, but you're walking a fine line between demonstrating restraint and writing ...

    Dec 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Happy

    After reading this (AWESOME) poem you have here, I went through and looked at reviews just to see what others had to say, and I noticed something interesting. Pretty much ...

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Artful Creatures

    You know, I'm really glad I clicked on this piece and read it all the way through. What initially caught my attention was the title which is always a good ...

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: And They All Fall Down EDITED

    I have to say it chokes me up a little to read this and reflect on when this idea first came to you as a dream. From that point to ...

    Dec 26, 2010


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
— LadyMysterio