TexanWriter

Hey, Nyx. First I'll say what a beautiful picture you painted here. It was well-written and fairly easy to read. I can't find any faults with your wording, which I ...

Ah, this will be easy to critique. Paragraphs, capitalization... I haven't read the other parts, just so you know. I'm lazy like that. Here we go. As I begin to ...

Ah, a nice, short piece. Hey, Tex here to review your work. I'm not the very best, or even very good at grammar, but I'll try to point out anything ...

Hey. Tex here, and I’m going to give you a review today. Just as a warning, I give my opinion, and my opinion can be a little (or a lot) ...

Aw, I liked it when Rhen married Dameon. I thought it was so dramatic (and sweet). Finally, someone's written an Aveyond fanfic! Sheesh! The best RPG ever, and-- ahem. So, ...

This probably would've been ten times funnier (which would be dangerous, head-exploding-from-laughter, suffocating funny) if... *dramatic music* I watched Naruto. It didn't have little bursts of side

Physical Appearance: -Nationality: Caucasian -Height: 5’ 6” -Weight/build: She looks (and feels) anorexic. Sickly and sickly skinny. Her build. -Hair: Black and shoulder length, often oily from la

Hey, apple! I'm Tex and I'll be your waitress this evening... That can't be right. Uh, I think the one for this is "I'll be reviewing your work". That sounds ...

Grammar I'm assuming you're doing present tense, since that is what the majority of this story is in. During the dialogue, it looks like you're using past tense, but a ...

Hey! Tex here, reviewing your work. GRAMMAR Honestly, I didn't find any grammar problems. Nice job! Nit-picks Shane grabbed Dallas's hand and led her to one of the teal couches. ...

Hello again! Once again, it is asked that you review others works before you post your own. That way everyone gets a chance to improve, because no one's perfect! GRAMMAR: ...

Hi! I'm Tex, and I'm here to give you a review. So, let's see what others haven't already noticed: Grammar You seem to switch tenses, from Past tense to Present, ...

Hey! Tex here. I haven't really given a review lately. *hangs head in embarrasment and shuffles feet* But oh well. I'm reviewing now! First off, Grammar: 1) This was kind ...

Oh my goodness! Is this based on the Harvest Moon video game series? That's the best series on the planet! I would have finished "Tree of Tranquility" ages ago if ...

I thought it was great, except for the final stanza: The monster mutters the final command, and then I'm finished and gone. Gone from this putrid land. It didn't really ...