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Re: Shadowdale - Chapter 1
"I understand you're a [woman] who knows how to get things." - Andy Dufresne (sort of) Opening with a paraphrase quote from Shawshank means someone should ask Morgan Freeman if ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: Revised Prologue - Shadowdale
Okay, looking for work to review. Let's see here... "Shadowdale." Hmmmm, probably some teen fiction about vampires, or fantasy nonsense... huh, what's this? A desperate escape from Dark Shadow People?
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: The Little Lady Who Reads.
"JUST MY IMAGINATION / RUNNIN' AWAY..." Straight from their "Sky's the Limit Album," The Temptations knew what they were talking about; sometimes the right woman comes along and causes our ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter One
PRIDE AND PREJUDICE / DOWNTWON ABBY: CHILD BORN There is such a thing as genre pandering, and it is not inherently evil; there are specific markets that sell specific stories ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: There was a little girl.
A PRISMATIC PRESENTATION OF PINK SHOES Labeled as a short story, this poetic snap shot of a little girl, or maybe several little girl's, (or maybe just the one girl ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: House of Whispers: Chapter 1 - Voices in the Forest
I'M CLAPPING, BUT THE FAIRIES AREN'T COMING BACK Fantasy is one of my favorite genre's, especially in the vein of 'Pan's Labyrinth' or 'The Ocean at the End of the ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Zipper of Your Pants
HANGING DAGGER, FALLING ZIPPER "There is no fate, but what we make," but the reality of that situation tends to be moot if you're an average teenager under the rule ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: I don't even smoke
CLASSIC EXAMPLE: LOOK, THEN LEAP I do not review poetry. No, that's not true. I do not review poetry very well. Yeah, that sounds better. Never the less, this poem ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: it's always them
A 'CLEAR EYES' COMMERCIAL... IN THE FUTURE! So you know you're doing a good job as a writer when your reader's mouth begins to water, their brow begins to sweat, ...
Mar 25, 2014 -
Re: Runaway - Chapter One
UNDER PRESSURE I'm combing all through the Studio Gibli catalog, but I can't find what anime film this is from. The imagery here is both very familiar, and at the ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: The Fawn I Killed
LIFE CYCLE There are a hand full of talks that most parents really don't look forward to delivering to their kids, and death is near the top of that list. ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: The Red-Wood Shelf (For 3 Pronged Contest.)
B-MOVIE HORROR CLASSIC After moving out to California, I stayed at my aunt's place for a few months. The guest room was stuffed floor to ceiling with those American Girl ...
Mar 22, 2014 -
Re: God called her home
Too Young to die, too Short a Life This is simply heart breaking. It also seems very familiar considering how many young deaths I've witnessed, so heart strings aside, I ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: Fairytale No. One
Fairy Tale No. One... Not Revolution No. 9 Despite being my passion, it has been a long while since I held to the core principal of writing, and that principal ...
Mar 21, 2014
