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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Diary of an Atheist

    Decent poem, real vitriolic, a pretty effective way of voicing tour opinions and views. This is the poem's strength but also it's weakness; make sure it's not overly explicit. Yeah, ...

    Apr 13, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Perfection Correction

    Great! Like the style, sparse but effective. Every single word carries it's due weight. Only issue is the last two lines: You’ll always seem to Hate me. I like the ...

    Apr 13, 2009
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Earths last stand

    Halo's "marines" suck. The real Marines, the U.S. Marine Corps, is the best regular fighting force in the free world. If you want to know why I think this, then ...

    Apr 11, 2006


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