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Re: Diary of an Atheist
Decent poem, real vitriolic, a pretty effective way of voicing tour opinions and views. This is the poem's strength but also it's weakness; make sure it's not overly explicit. Yeah, ...
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: Perfection Correction
Great! Like the style, sparse but effective. Every single word carries it's due weight. Only issue is the last two lines: You’ll always seem to Hate me. I like the ...
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: Earths last stand
Halo's "marines" suck. The real Marines, the U.S. Marine Corps, is the best regular fighting force in the free world. If you want to know why I think this, then ...
Apr 11, 2006
