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Thanks so much for your kind and insightful words! Interestingly enough I submitted this for a creative writing class, and my professor said the time jumps could be reordered so ...

Thanks for the lovely comments and likewise :)

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Hiya thanks for your helpful and interesting comments! I suppose I was sort of going for the magical realism tone, where all the bizarre stuff that happens is treated as ...

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Hi and thanks for your nice comment! I intended the 'quiet old gentlemen' to be the dark hills and the dark trees. Perhaps I could add a 'they're' at the ...

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Thanks a lot, I'll take that on board!

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