Tenyo

Hey V! I like this, it's sweet! Rhyming and Rhythm Rhyming is sooo much harder than it seems, don't you find? Generally I don't even try unless I'm writing to ...

Hey Authoress! This is fantastic. I like it a lot. Topic: There are a lot of theories and ideas about why we take a fascination in the evils of the ...

Hey Temi! I was drawn in by the title, and the theme is pretty good. It's an interesting way to look at the issues of today's romance. But then the ...

Aw man. I wasn't expecting that D= First, Happy Review Day! It seems this little gem slipped under the radar, so it's time to dig it back out again. This ...

Hey Alexis! Happy review day! Better late than never, right! The thing that struck me here is the dialogue- it's a bit like watching talking heads >.< In natural conversation ...

Hey, Happy Review Day! This little gem slipped under the radar it seems, so here is a belated review. So, first impressions I wasn't overly thrilled with this. The opening ...

Ah, a Hunger Games fan! Welcome to yws! Spoiler! You might want to put a warning in your description, since there are a lot of people who have seen the ...

Hey Rosan! The opening 'Morning light filtered...' There are a *lot* of novels and chapters that start with morning sunlight filtering through a window, maybe you could shake it up ...

Hey Samara! I'm gonna be really blunt in this review, but remember I mean for the best! There's something funky going on with your writing. Title first Title. Whut? XD ...

Ooh, script! First note You don't need to put 'copyright' on your work when you put it on yws. It seems... pretentious? And I wouldn't at all assume you're that ...

Hey Roachredford! The Style I really like the way this is written. There's enough detail to paint a clear picture of the world and the setting without cluttering it up. ...

Space opera 8D How did this escape my claws. I'm a huge fan of the genre, so this work instantly gets bonus points from me. Out of curiosity, did you ...

Hey Buggie! Balance What I notice most about this is that it is very, very dialogue heavy. I generally recommend having an equal balance between description, action, dialogue and introspection. ...

Okay, so I figure I owe you some kind of review =p Descriptions I could just drown in your descriptions. Everything in this feels so vivid and real, I almost ...

Hey Lost! Short works are so hard to review >.< I think it's really cool that you're working on these. It's a hard skill to learn so I can't wait ...