Tempest

Woah! This is really good. I like your writing style a lot. I was left wondering about "The Guardian" and would have liked to know a little more about it, ...

I liked this, my only gripe would be the spacing, but i see the kind person above me has already touched on that point. I am left intrigued, which is ...

Hehe! A clever poem :o . I liked how the song/arists were incorperated into the poem (this was done very well). Some bits I didn't understand, but I'm sure thats ...

Tempest like... :). However I can't understand the subtleties and metaphor of poetry I do like this poem, it really had, whats the word... Feeling? Character? Hmm... Anyways in my ...

Hey thinker ;)! The battle scenes were good! Your chosen language for the fight between the stormtroopers and the rebels was also excellent. I only have one nitpick; you mentioned ...

Hi ;), I don't usually check out Fanfiction... But as it's you I'll make an exception. You obviously know your Star Wars. Personally I think it was too short a ...

Hey there I'm pretty new too! You should introduce yourself in the community section, maybe you'd get more reviewers on your first piece. There were no spelling mistakes i could ...

Me like! Was there a prequel? Will you post any sequels? Anyway good job! :) :D

Hey there! This sounds like something I'd write :wink: . (strong and big (slightly stooped) male troll with wicked horns) I don't think you can have brackets within brackets :cry: ...

Hi! I'm new too! :D When I first read this poem i took it somewhat literally and didn't really understand it, then I read what I was meant to "read ...