Teigue

First off, I'd like to thank all of you for reviewing. I know it's short! But does everything have to be long to be good or complete? I'll be honest ...

Good poem, I like the mysterious, eerie feeling hidden in it. I think the last stanza had a big impact because of the extra line that was brief, and the ...

Regarding the little quirks of the writing, I.E. fragments, they're supposed to be there. I can't honestly say I'm sorry for putting them there, it's just how the character is. ...

I really liked how you transitioned from one line to another. Each had some relevance to the line before it which makes the poem flow a lot nicer.