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Luv it, luv it, luv it! This seriously sounds like its coming out of a book :D OK, so this time I found four mistakes in all. One where you ...

This was a good piece of writing, even though I saw a few grammar mistakes, I really liked it. You did a good job with not making some words sound ...

Again I LOVE it!! I'm so glad you continued. :D :D I did find one mistake, but I cant find it now.... :( (I think you left out a word ...

OH MY GOSH!!! That was amazing!! Even though I did find a few mistakes (spelling and grammar) I completely LOVED it! It had me smiling and you described the characters ...

This was seriously cool! I love things that are about supernatural beings but I'm getting tired of Vampires and werewolves. You definitely have something going and the work really makes ...

I think this could be a very good story when you continue it :) But remember not to leave us hanging with not telling the readers more about the main ...

I liked this very much and that probably has a big part with it being about wolves. Have you read the book "The Sight" By: David Clement-Davis???? If you like ...