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Re: Child of the Moon - Prolouge
you better watch out.” I apologize if I am incorrect, but I remember my English teacher telling us that it should be, "You had better," and that saying, "You better," ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: The Animal princess (1)
Queen Grace walked up and fo r ward Foward, should be forward, and in this case, walking up and forward share the same meaning, so eliminate up or forward, depending ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: The Curse of the Queen
The queen, named Harmonia, did not fear him, but she should have…. I think if you eliminated the word named, the sentence would have a better flow, though it is ...
Jan 29, 2010
