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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Child of the Moon - Prolouge

    you better watch out.” I apologize if I am incorrect, but I remember my English teacher telling us that it should be, "You had better," and that saying, "You better," ...

    Feb 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Animal princess (1)

    Queen Grace walked up and fo r ward Foward, should be forward, and in this case, walking up and forward share the same meaning, so eliminate up or forward, depending ...

    Jan 30, 2010
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Curse of the Queen

    The queen, named Harmonia, did not fear him, but she should have…. I think if you eliminated the word named, the sentence would have a better flow, though it is ...

    Jan 29, 2010


But sometimes a hypocrite is nothing more than a person who is in the process of changing.
— Dalinar (Oathbringer by Brandon Sanderson)