TearsOnYourFace

So, my "review" is so not going to be as good as thegirlandthepen's! I should really start to properly review things. But I think she's done it so thoroughly that ...

Ooh, I can't wait to see what you do with this! And a nice short excerpt too... Only thing is that in the last paragraph you have put "minutes" rather ...

Yo! It was the title of this that caught my eye - so nonchalant for such a serious thing! Anyway it looks interesting. Couple of things... There was a gaping ...

Hey, I really like this. It looks like it could turn into an interesting story. The main character is interesting, almost slightly odd, but in a good way because it ...