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Re: Self-Destruction
*unglues eyes from screen* *unglues eyes from screen* omgomgomg that was WONDERFUL WORK! I am totally at a lose of words except omg (over and over again) I gasped and ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
But now I realize that they are about nothing. Those books are 1600 pages of nothingness. I had to stop reading Breaking Dawn because I simply couldn't stand the emptiness. ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Open Up [edit]
I loved how you cut off the story with the screaming, don't change that, please. It was chilling and frightening. I loved the way you made the man behave before ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Little bit of tragic love stort-needs development!
It was sad and made my eyes fall. But it lacked something to be called 'tragic love', in my opinion. Maybe it needs a little more dialect and passion formed ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Senseless
Wow, dark and real on several levels, (I can hear Birthday Massacre singing it). I love it. In places it sort of hic-uped on me, but the flow is brought ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Blue Eyed Boy
I almost cried. A few typos: "Chorus: Bleu eyed boy I can't help but stare at you boy I dosen't seem fair " BLUE, not Bleu "You leave me falling ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: je souhaite
I loved the way you put both love and death, don't we all want one or the other? The way you ended it at first caught me, because you won't ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: Don't Fret
I loved the way you put this, the narrator voice was so real and believible it was in my head and I felt as if I was the girl. It ...
Jan 2, 2009