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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Limitation

    This is a very perplexing poem... in a good way. "Overdose" is a great introduction to set the mood for the poem, and the following word "Silence" gives it an ...

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Lark's Cry

    This is beautiful. Have you ever tried experimenting with the rhythm of your words? It's difficult to make a consistent rhythm, but if you can do that, it makes a ...

    Oct 2, 2014


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