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Sam! Is there no end to your genius? ;) Only Ringo survived, though he was old and his hair fell out in calico clumps. It's actually genetically impossible for a ...

...You are amazing. Making herself believe that when her her chest felt like it was torn in two was the difficult part. Extraneous "her." The militiamen ringed around the rubble—a ...

Hello Juju, and welcome to YWS! Let me start off by saying that it is in the YWS Rules that you must do a minimum of 2 critiques for every ...

Ahoy Wang Chung! Welcome to YWS. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. First, before I say anything else, you must do at least 2 critiques ...

Hello there! I haven't seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Now, the fallacy in your argument here is that ...

Hi Squishy! Man, your username is awesome. Love it. :D Anyway. I am Saint, if I haven’t introduced myself before, and I shall be your critiquer today! Personally speaking, you ...

Hey again Bittersweet! *waves* Good hook. Dust is an interesting take. Yet for some reason I’m imagining sawdust. XD *slaps self with a large fish* My eyes swiftly shifted back ...

Hello there! I don't think I've seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Indeed, little girls wearing adult clothing move ...

*waves* Hey Bittersweet. Don't think I've seen you around before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D It’s windy. It’s always windy in New Mexico. ...

I ran away from home when leaves were hanging to trees by their last vein. Lovely imagery there. Me gusta. (I like) In fact, me gusta todo este parrafo. (I ...

Okay, minor details are on their way, and due to the new change in reviewing policy, I'm going to put my major comments here. ^_^ Honestly, I find it a ...

Hi there! I think I've seen you around YWS once or twice, but I don't think I've ever properly introduced myself. My name is Saint and I shall be your ...

Hi there! Just a little note that your title has been changed to lower-case letters. All-caps are painful and againts site rules. ;) Speaking of site rules, it is a ...

As requested, JFW! Sorry I'm a slowpoke. xD giving me the eyes of an eagle. Spiffy metaphor. The yellowed pages of my book flipped in the gentle breeze, bringing me ...

Hey Choco! Sorry about the delay, I had to go for a while. ^^ Anyway. Keeping in mind what I said on your prologue... Her Husky, Caleb, was running a ...