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Ahoy there Gurockian! Welcome to YWS. My name is Saint. Here at YWS, we have a couple rules that you need to know about. For one, space out your paragraphs! ...

A cliffhanger? A CLIFFHANGER?!?!?!?!?!? *smites* Meanie! I want to know what happens! xD [/waits impatiently for chapter 8] Crit's been e-mailed. I just felt the need to smite you. xD ...

Ahoy Dreamer! *waves* Her leg sank well past the ankle in the water, and she grimaced. She was still wearing her dry-time sandals. They didn’t have a reason to give ...

Hey Gadi! *waves* The old man was sitting unresponsive in his old armchair, snoring severely with a cylinder in his mouth. For some reason, I pictured him with a Coke ...

Ahoy! I've seen you around YWS a few times, but I don't think I've ever properly introduced myself. I'm Saint and I shall be your critic today! It was all ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS, my name is Saint. Thanks for commenting on Ten Years, Twenty-Eight Days. The first problem I see with this is that I can't read it! ...

Hey Rieda! *waves* Ooh, R rated. Scandalous. ;) The chicken was judging me. Best. Opening line. Ever. It’s beady eyes boring into me It is beady eyes boring into me? ...

Ahoy! I've seen you a few times in Chat. And I shall be your critiquer today! ^^ My darling Lilleth, I will be home by 10:00 o’clock tonight. Dinner is ...

So, I'm confused. Are you writing a textbook or something? Seriously, as a preface, it's a bit boring. I was so bored I read the first bit and scanned the ...

What an idiot. Hooray Aet for giving him a right smackdown! Cookies for you! Aet is mah hero! One of them, at least. ;) Love it.

Ahoy! I haven't seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critic today. :D It never opened its eyes, though it was quick enough ...

Holiday specials now, Aet 2.0? xD Oh, you make me laugh. Genius in the guise of insanity. *applauds* -Saint Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:

Ahoy there, haven't seen you around YWS before! My name is Saint, and I shall be your critiquer today. *bows* The first problem I see with this is formatting! The ...

*gigglesnort* What does Dono sound like when he sings, anyway? Lol, this is brilliant, Mesh and Mesh's Mum! ^_^ -St. Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:

Ahoy there! Don't think I've seen you around YWS before. I'm Saint, and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Hmm... your introduction is both good and slightly bad. Did ...