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I think this is a very good poem, lots of emotions shown. It would be better, and a bit more poem-like, if it had some more format to it. My ...

Wow, this was a great beginning. I love her fascination with the apple, how she died, and how she reacted to being dead. :D Like many stories, like many trees, ...

Vampires in Cinderella are interesting, and I like how you sort of followed Ever After's version of events. Sort of being the keyword, but it did remind me of Ever ...

An interesting continuation of the part before, revealing a bit more of who Amarie really is. Amarie ordered , stretching out her long legs [s]tightly encased in black britches[/s]. "Oh ...

A great start of a story, although I do agree that we could at least get deeper into foreshadowing to give the reader more of a hook. I'll just try ...

I like this poem, the images brought about by your words. I like how this isn't your sappy love poem, and might even be a poem warning against that. I'm ...

An interesting story, I like the way you use magic within this. And, having a blind protagonist is interesting and not often done. I'd like to see what happens next. ...

I don't think this sounds rushed at all, I think the events are slow enough that it doesn't sound rushed. Yet another great chapter, that keeps leading the readers on. ...

Another great chapter, I like how you went back in the past to explain a few things. It was interesting seeing how the werewolves thought while hunting, and even just ...

I did start this review after I reviewed the prologue, but then I had to get off the computer... Anyway, onto the review! An interesting way of continuing. I'm glad ...

Since you've edited this, I don't feel bad for adding another review. This is a really great story, it really captures my interest, :D . I like your view on ...

First, I do have to say that it is very hard reviewing the second chapter of a story without reading the first, let alone the eleventh chapter of a story. ...

This is an interesting story, time loops are always interesting. And, I do like the mystery of moving to a new house and finding a strange object. Reminds me a ...

I really like this poem and the feelings that it captures. It really reveals the grief that the narrator is feeling as he or she looks through their mementos, remembering ...

I like the passion to this poem, and how it brings attention to the problems some people are experiencing right now. This poem reminds me of one of my favorite ...