Tatra

An interesting start to a story and an interesting interpretation on what happens when we die. I am curious as to what will happen later on in the story. :D ...

It's a very interesting crackfic; completely random in humor and everything else. I liked how the characters knew that they were self inserts because they themselves were writing down what ...

I really liked this script; it was really funny. My kind of humor: random and crackish. :D I loved your characters and everything that happened in the script. BARTENDER: Here ...

This is an interesting start, but I totally agree with Ester on the slang; it makes it really hard to read. I do kind of like Jake, but I also ...

This sounds like an awesome song, something with a great message and hints as to how to sing it. :D Chorus I’d do anything to see your smile again to ...

I don't have much to add, given that your piece was so good and you've had several other great reviewers, but I just had to say something. Navita linked me ...

Homeschoolers unite! :D That being said, this is a very interesting topic to write on. I've never really thought about writing about homeschooling. I agree with the other reviewer about ...

I agree with the others, you need more imagery in this. I think you're focusing too much on the form of the poem than what you're really saying in the ...

First thought is wow; these poems just sucked me in, from the moment I read the titles and through the poems themselves. I can definitely see how they are related. ...

The title was what made me click on the story, though I do agree with the other reviewers that it doesn't really fit with the story. But, it still is ...

You know, this kind of disturbs me. I mean, it so far sounds like an interesting story, but there are some elements that really do disturb me. We'll get to ...

A very interesting start to things, I can't wait to see how the Forsaken Rose goes. I love the storytelling tone to this prologue and I think it particularly fits ...

An interesting start for a story, I do like the world that you've shown us and the characters are great, too. From what I've read in your other review, your ...

I stopped watching Veronica Mars during the second season as it just started getting on my nerves. I liked her when she was the outcast and not suddenly the it ...

I'm interested in learning the summary for this in order to see what you're trying to do with the fic. Usually I like to add in something I liked about ...