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  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Phone lines

    I really did like this, it has a lot of potenital. It would not, however, suffer entirely if you were to expand upon it just a bit. If this is ...

    May 12, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Midas Man

    The use of the word ‘line’ twice in a single sentence takes away from the general readability of the piece and can also seem as if the writer does not ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Silence.

    Okay, this is fantastic and so very apt. This was a pleasure to read - not only because of your skill as a writer but also because of the reason ...

    May 6, 2014


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