TannMermaid

How lovely, a poem filled with gratitude. I know many people who would be outraged by seeing this poem, but in all honesty when I read it i could feel ...

I. Need. More. This is beautiful! You should take more pride in your work my dear. There are small past and present tenses that need to be fixed, but to ...

The feels. This is a lovely story, I enjoyed it a lot. In the second diary entry it felt to repetitive. It was so elaborate and full of poetry. It ...

Haha, absolutely loved it. Only thing I really have to say is that you have so many characters introduced here that you do not give the reader enough time to ...

Wow, this is devastating. Of course there are certain parts in you writing where you describe a certain emotion then reflect the opposite. If your actions are opposite to the ...

This has a gripping narrative! The intro sentence was grabbing and hooked the reader. I applaud you for this. Of course there are small things that are inaccurate in the ...

From what I have read is it correct for me to assume that you consider "The hard times" equivalent to "living in sin?" This song is powerful. The challenge is ...

This story is very subtle, if you don't pay attention you could miss the small details that foreshadow their mothers death, I like this. Although I agree with RedRose8, if ...

Wow! Lovely indeed. The idea of a beautiful man is an idea that many are not used too. Especially those who are unfamiliar with the idea that men do not ...