TanazMasaba

hey this is apretty good story. Why don't I kind of list all the positives and the negatives? Good: 1) Brilliant concept, really unique, really creative 2) No distracting or ...

"My hands shook as I put the key in the lock. When I twisted I heard a very soft click." I don't think it goes with the flow. "Maybe he ...

hey this is actually kind of cool you know, except for the last bit I guess, that was confusing. I think you should have given a little more attention for ...

I love the entire poem. It's beautiful, emotional and you were able to express your self very creatively. However, don't you think the poem becomes a little too repetitive some ...