Talulahbelle

Thanks, Tanya! I really appreciate your reviews!

The above reviewers are right. This is really good. I don't read alot of poetry, so maybe I'm not the best for this, but I didn't see anything to fix. ...

Thank you! I'm super flattered. And of course I'll pm you when I post more.

Hey, thanks so much for the review. Just to clear up the Profe thing: First- The cent sign wasn't a cent sign when I pasted it, it was one of ...

Hey guys, thanks for the reviews! About Elise and where she went, and the doors, and Alastair's vampire-ness, I address that all in the next segment I just didnt have ...

And here's the link to Alastair:

By the way, here's the link to the prologue:

Hey, I'm really drawn in by this story. A few of your sentences fell awkwardly, but it wasn't that big of a deal. I love that you kill the character ...

I'm SO SORRY! I had no idea that it was so loooonnnnggg! Now I know... :thud:

Thanks guys! This is a tiny segment of something I wrote awhile ago and i do go on to explain things but it was my first posting and i was ...