Talking_Pinata

Shame POSSESSES ME! I MISSPELLED the TITLE! DX *edits it* And yeah. That time with the "Little Raven Black" was on purpose.

Thankyou for the critique! It has been very helpful and I've edited the poem as you pointed out my grammar and capitalization issues.

Oh. And dont has a ' between the n and the t as well so it looks like don't

Thankyou for the reviews! I've already edited it once based upon your nitpicks! They were very helpful ^^

Hm. The ending seemed cliche to me. I mean its all suspensful then..."SUPRISE!" -___- That's just my opinon though. In all other senses its very well written!

I liked this! I wasn't so pleased with how it ended though. I mean...we're waiting for something terrible and...the cliche "suprise!" That's just my opinion though. Its well written in ...

Wow this story was very wonderful! The horse's point of view! Brilliant! The title is an eye-catcher!

The rhyming was well pulled off in this! The story was great. Not much to complain about! I loved it!

Nothing to complain about! Very interesting and somewhat saddening. (actually rather saddening)

Thankyou everyone for the advice! Its very helpful!

Thankyou everyone! This was very helpful!

Thankyou everyone for the terrific reviews! I'll be editing it when I get a good chance!

I gained a star! WOOT WOOT! Okay, sorry, bye.

Wow. On to part to. That's all I have to say. On to part two.

Thankyou everyone! I'll be working on my rather strange sentence structure for awhile...and then I'll edit it! Thankyou again!