Tabithalillian

OOOh, be careful. I know this has been said but I am just a littler nervous, a girl who is a sophmore in highschool goes to live with her father, ...

goodness! you make every thing so real and amazing! Though this story is much diffrent than Panic is it amazingly wonderful. Again you write so fluidly and your charecters are ...

dang now I have to go to bed, in my room, in the dark, WITH AN OPEN WINDOW. dang im shutting it now. Well you writing is wonderful you make ...

I really really really liked it. It was very sweet and beautiful. One thing, the shirt, what imposrtance did it have, I mean I think it should stay in there ...

it is slightly cheesy yet interesting and original, and what good story doesnt have a little bit of cheese? I think you should definetly do it. Writing is only really ...

THat was amazing! You got Jacob black down pat! Your writing style mocks Stephenie Meyer's perfectly. I love the description I love how well you know jacob to make him ...

You work is wonderful. I really love how descriptive and how you have captures the Victorian Era perfectly. One thing is some times you thow in modern day language like ...

Ok it was ok, one thing is that when you talk about this girl named Pandora, you use her name A LOT. pandora did this, then pandora did this, then ...

Are you like Meyer in disquise? :) That was very good. As some one said before me it really did remind me of one of those gushy scenes that make ...

very good. One thing, I would like to know what the child looked like? apparently it was a girl due to the name but if there had been no name ...

I thought it was very good. One thing, I do not know much about historical fiction but I feel like you used the word Tis quite a bit. Also, I ...

it was really good. I like the new take on vampires, how they all dont have to go to a new school and fall in love with a human! But ...

ok still very good but a few things I didnt get, earlier her mom is comforting her because they broke up, then in the morning she just randomly walks into ...

This was good, once again! I love it. One thing It was good but it all happened a bit fast. Like one seccond she couldnt live with out him, and ...

It was really nice. I am new here so sorry if I say some thing wrong! But I liked it. One thing is it seemed a bit rushed and I ...