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Hey there. Woah, this poem blew me away. I'm so glad to have joined a website with so many talented writers! Something is knocking the window - it's just a ...

Hey there. Good read (: Now this is going to sound VERY picky, but that's just me. I noticed you used the word 'uneasy' twice. I think in a short ...

Woah. I know I'm supposed to give some sort of constructive criticism for this, but I don't want too! This was so amazing, particularly for the writing of just a ...

Awh this poem was so good to read! It was so light hearted and fun! Reminds me a lot of something Dr. Suess would write! Would make an excellent children's ...

Now now, I do not wish to be harsh...but perhaps this poem is a little cliche? To me, this poem reminds me of something I would have been writing a ...

This poem was beautiful. It really made me think and more than anything feel. It would be great if you could draw on this idea and perhaps create something a ...