TEcho

Okay...umm....I am still COMPLETLEY lost. I know I probably sound like a broken record but you keep jumping from one setting and scene of the story to, it seems like, ...

The content in this chapter is awesome! But the transition from the last chapter to this really quirks me. Also her sister seems almost bi-polar. You describe her as happy ...

The start is really good! Your characters are really easy to get into quickly, which is sometimes hard to do, so KUDOS for that! I think it begins in a ...

Hey! i must say, this had a sad little ending! But its not the ending! wootwoot! haha. First off I have to say, how you described your surroundings was amazing! ...

Hey! I just read your chapter and firstly thought there is so much potential in this novella just waiting to be accessed! This was a very short chapter and it ...

Work with me here, I'm still a new-new person! I really liked this chapter, there is a bunch of books out there like this but this one didnt feel the ...

This has SOOO much emotion in every word, i can almost hear the anguish in her voice, amazing tone! There were a few things i didn't like, she kinda sounds ...

OH my gosh! I love this story, its exactly what my head dialogue sounds like on a daily basis. There wasnt much that i didnt like about this story, its ...

OMJ. This was such a heart wrenching story. I liked how you didnt stray off topic when there were so many opportunity to and how you connected the title and ...

This is amazing! it sounds like shes thinking about him and then it just hits her that she cant have him! So heartbroken! The only thing i dont like is ...

Hey! I'm kinda new at this so work with me here haha. So i was reading your story and one thing that bothered me a little was that you were ...