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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Looking Up to the Sky

    This is really one dark poem. You get the feeling through, the last line works well as a punch line too. I'd like to see more structure in the poem, ...

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Perfection

    I really like the message you're giving through this poem. The first few rhymes are great, and make the poem beautiful. The last few rhymes on the other hand, is ...

    Jan 5, 2009


As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality