Synnoev

heya! Synne here to review :) Overall, I thought this was pretty good, I'm intrigued as to how the girl got from such a normal seeming situation to being chased ...

Hi creativity! I thought this poem was very good; you really encapsulated the carefree feeling of the narrator and made me wish I was there too! I'm blurring the line ...

I told myself that this was all some kind of sick, twisted game. I told myself that this wasn't happening. It was all just in my head. I saw colors ...

To begin with, I was quite dubious of this piece, cause I've become naturally wary whenever vampires are mentioned, ever. But you actually managed to draw me in really well! ...

Helloooo! Synne here to review this :) Overall I think this is pretty good - I completely didn't expect the ending! My advice to make this better would be to ...

Hi, synne here :) From just a first quick read, I think one thing you really need to sort out is the formatting; some of the paragraphs, especially the last ...

Wow! My first impression of this was a really good one; you built up the pace really well with the short snippy lines, and I found myself getting caught up ...