SyedaFariha

I see great potential, snap out of that writer's block and arrange your piece into the greatness it deserves to be. ;)

:D I'm glad you posted this

Well written! :mrgreen:

The description originally feels random, but eventually it all relates in a great story. It's amazing how you can tell a good story in so few words and still create ...

I loved this peice. The way you integrate colourful descriptions qwith emotions is beautiful. Hope you have a good time writing, looking forward to reading more of your work.

youre such an amazing writer

The poem was articulated magnificently. Especially the last line as everyone has mentioned earlier. The poem increased my curiosity on knowing the real story behind such poetic words. Keep up ...