Swottielottie

Thanks! Gladius, I know this needs work. My laptop crashed with the new version of this chapter, so I'm going to have to write it again -_-. I'll take everything ...

Thanks Harley! Same with your story! Sweeney_Todd: In my story, they do! But thanks anyway.

Thanks! It was going to be the same Ellima but then I thought of a better storyline! I should change the name really... XD Thanks for the comments!

whoops! Deleted that word by accident! I'll definetly put the fainting bit in! Thanks again! I'm working on th Ivy problem :D

Thanks for the review! I'm afraid Ivy probably won't get embarrased, but she will lose her airs and graces!

Thanks, but this was rubbish and or some thing we had to do at school that my teacher never marked.

Thank you! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed your story yet :( I'll do it tonight! I've been so bus with the olympics etc :D

Thanks, Wolf link! I'm glad you liked that part! The bird unfortunatly does not have magical powers 8)...

Thanks! I'll change them as well, although I may not post the edited version on here, I'm lazy :D I'll review your story when I get a spare few minutes!

Oh yes, I see what you mean! It is a bit odd that a raven should die so easily... I'll edit that ASAP! You're completly right about Ivy, I wrote ...

Thanks a lot, I kinda forgot about the whole rhyming thingy... :S XD That's really helpful.

Thanks for the comment, but I've always sucked at poetry :( that's why I try and stick to fiction!

Erm... I have no idea. Chapter three is almost done and I've done some Chapter 4.. I'll tell you on msn, Harley :D. Thanks for commenting!

Yep, you're completely right, I was inspired by the secret garden. Thank you for critting! Thank for pointing out my mistakes!

Whoops! :oops: I wrote this twice and forgot about the bit before. Sorry, and thanks!