Swires

The Golden Compass's daemons and made them daimons Its called Northern Lights in the UK! And the acutal compass is called the Alethometre.

((Paragraphing a little messed up but here it is)) CHAPTER 1 The bullet soared past Raptor’s cheek, slicing his flesh slightly; a speck of blood splashed in his eye. He ...

"Definitely continue; I don't think anyone should tell you when to continue and when to stop. If you enjoy writing it, then do so. If you decide to post it, ...

Yes, I think my own mind must have assumed Blake would be a boy and I must have subconsciously ignored she/her etc... Yes your use of frock is correct because ...

So do you want the whole story critted from your first post to the end?

Yes lol! Rum is supposed to be an utter annoyance. Yes a semi-colon would go better there but I have a tendancy not to use them to spite MS Word ...

Part 2: Masus, forgetting about the days wounds found strength, a new courage that could stare death in the face and command it with the lifting of a finger. He ...

Thankyou Kay, Ill be extending this when the time comes to include it in my main draft, I agree with everything you said, it is a little rushed at the ...

LOL! It is a pathetic poem, I am more of a short story/novelist

Thanks for the review, No I dont like Masus as much as The Boatman either but the Boatman wasnt really the villain of the story, Isabel was the villain of ...

Yeah, someone else said about the confusion, I'll be sure to comb out any anti-flow on edit. Thankyou for the comment, It is a really confidence boost when people like ...

Yes I loved the character of Elijah.

Yes it does sound rather odd, but is that just our English humour?

The Boatman may pop up a little later, I just need another project so I can rustle up some more ideas for The Boatman, The Boatman may even be a ...

LOL! I have to say this is great satire.