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Re: She Felt Cold
OMG!!! THIS IS AMAZING!! I LOVE HOW YOU TELL THE STORY LIKE YOU'RE(CHARACTER) IS TALKING TO ME. I LOVE THIS!! THERE HAD BEEN SOME TYPOS WITH COMMAS. THIS STORY IS ...
Jul 31, 2013 -
Re: She Felt Cold
OMG!!! THIS IS AMAZING!! I LOVE HOW YOU TELL THE STORY LIKE YOU'RE(CHARACTER) IS TALKING TO ME. I LOVE THIS!! THERE HAD BEEN SOME TYPOS WITH COMMAS. THIS STORY IS ...
Jul 31, 2013 -
Re: Naturmalina
I LOVE THIS!! BUT SO MANY PERIODS AND MISTAKES. PLEASE EDIT THEM,IT WILL MAKE THE ATTENTION OF THE READER GO AWAY. AND ACTUALLY MY LANGUAGE IS NOT ENGLISH BUT I ...
Jul 30, 2013 -
Re: Proudly Psychopathic
THIS STORY IS AMAZING!! THE WORDS REALLY HAVE MEANINGFUL MEANINGS. BUT SOME SENTENCES HAVE PROBLEM LIKE THIS: Derek goes on. I hear him rotating his lock. I THINK YOU SHOULD ...
Jul 30, 2013