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Thank you, I appreciate it. It really helps. :)

Thank you, I appreciate it. It really helps. :)

Thank you, I appreciate it. It really helps. :)

Thank you, I appreciate it. It really helps. :)

Didn't find anything wrong with with. Good grammar, nice spelling, punctuation. However, you did use roughly twice. Keep writing! I look forward to seeing the tenth chapter. (Sorry for stalking ...

I sure one of my school comrades would agree with this. She absolutely loves pandas. It's cute. :)

Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it. :)

Great job! I noticed the changed from the reviews, and they are very nice changes. No spelling or grammatical errors. The entire story flowed together. I can't wait to see ...

Thank you for the suggestions. Did I mention how the disease started? Anyway, she's actually a bit short for a 19 year old, sorry about the spacing. The armor, swords, ...

Thank you, I'll keep that in mind. However, I have no idea how to add onto the end.

The dream was meant to be confusing, as the next line says, she believes that it's either a vision of the future, which it is. I do agree with adding ...

Hello Silverlock! Thanks for the review. This was meant to be an outline, sort of a background so the reader understands the story behind it.

This is a great piece! I agree wholeheartedly with it! Anyway, No spelling, or grammatical errors. I like how in the beginning you put it like you were conversing with ...

Thanks for the insight. I'll make some changes now. :)

Muchas Gracias Senor Nate! In other words, Many Thanks Sir Nate!