Sweetyb1

Dang, that was really, really, beautiful. This is a great poem and well really I'm not sure there's much that needs fixing. I really loved the dining on music, listening ...

Well you already I know I like it, but here's some extra advice for you my friend! First off, incorporating songs into a piece is something I really enjoy, but ...

Hey, I really like this idea. I love the series, and I have always wished there were more details about Katniss' father. He seems like such a good guy and ...

Very sweet poem. Your rhythm was great except I stumbled a little with the line: "And he gave me a happy chirp to assure me he was okay" But I ...

Great job! I love the repetition in this! I did see one grammar mistake though, but it's just a quick edit. Your lines: "Speeches that, though dripping with dulcet richness, ...