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Re: fixing the national debt
yes this is satire. there is no way this is viable solution to our national debt. this was meant to be a joke about government spending, and all other problems ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: the friendless punishment
thank you for your suggestions everbody; I really appreciate it. to answer your comments I don't have a plot. Honestly, I didn't think that far. The story is a variation ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: what is earth like?
any all comments are appreciated. I am not a poet and writing poetry is not what i am good at so all comments good or bad are welcome. thanks
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: my burden
Thanks for the suggestions. I have never really written poetry before this was just something that came to mind one night. so any criticisms are appreciated
May 19, 2010
