SuzieCake

I loved this. The whole time I read this, I was thinking of the many different times I'd been placed in this kind of situation. Maybe not the same setting, ...

I really enjoyed this. The whole time I was reading this, I could see everything you described in my mind. I also liked how you described all of the emotions ...

I didn't read any of the previous reviews, so if I repeat anything, I apologize. Allrighty then, this is chapter twenty. This is where the main plot is revealed, where ...

I personally think that this was really good. Short, yes, but good. I liked the way your MC described everything. >.> I have a lot of problems with descriptions and ...

This is good. I didn't really notice much wrong. Just a few little errors that are easily made while writing. Nothing too harmful. Those will be in the attachment. Anyway, ...

Sorry it took me so long to review this for you. I really apologize. I've been working a lot. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this. Honestly, I'm still as hooked now ...

This was cool. I liked it. But I was a little disappointed when it didn't go into much more detail. Why doesn't she want to marry Wesley? Why do her ...

This was amazing! I'm waiting for the next chapter. I really can't wait to hear more about Isaac. I would have posted an actual review, but lucyy covered most of ...

I don't have any questions this time. =) Yay me! And I can't really find anything I don't like about it, either. So... the only thing left to say is: ...

What I didn't like about the chapter: 1) It doesn't start off where the last one ended. I want to know more about what happens after he promises he'll never ...

What I didn't like about the chapter: 1) Well... it was a little confusing and it didn't go into much detail. Questions: 1) Why didn't he give her a better ...

What I didn't like about the chapter: Nothing! It was great! Questions: 1) Why didn't Daniel question why he had to get rid of the bodies? 2) Why would Michael ...

What I didn't like about the chapter: 1) Your fight scene with the characters was a little too abrupt. Questions: 1) If they were yelling while she was standing at ...

Okay, before I say anything at all, I'm going to let you know that I'm loving this, and yes, I am hooked. Just remember that if I don't say it ...

Okay, so I'm wondering... Does Susannah ever go back into the secret room? And what's up with Daniel? Why did he take off as soon as he found out who ...