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Re: seven sins debate #1
waaah, you weren't supposed to tell the sin, aw well, too late now.
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: Lust
Thank you, we do hope that you get to critiquing our next work "Sloth", it should explain a little more about the "gifts" that are given out. :)
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: Lust
Yay! Thank you soooooo much, this really means a lot. Noel is planning the next plot and we hope that you enjoy it too, although the title must remain a ...
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: Sloth
So not ten days, more like 20, at most, if we're lucky then we might get ten.
Apr 11, 2013 -
Re: Lust
soooooooooooooo sorry Noel! hee hee... *ducks under desk* :)
Apr 11, 2013 -
Re: Sloth
Thank you soooo much! Noel and I both appreciate it greatly. Have you read the one before this "Lust"? Pretty explanatory, if you haven't please do, we would really like ...
Apr 11, 2013 -
Re: Sloth
Oh, yeah. I kinda forgot to tell you that there'a another story that comes before this, hee hee. Lust is what we called it. Thank you so much for the ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (prologue)
Definitely, I am glad that it made questions arise. Now explaining them in an interesting fashion, that shall be difficult. Hope you like the next one.
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (prologue)
Yay! awesome, I'm so glad that you got that feel. I was kinda tired when I wrote this and was watching some show so not all of my focus was ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (prologue)
Yeah, after I wrote this I was like "well aren't you duper (double super) short?" I will definitely bring the Gardilla back into play and explain more. Hopefully this turns ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: Sloth
Yes, then we deleted the whole thing and did it again! Ha ha ha ha! So much effort went into this guy, please enjoy!
Apr 7, 2013 -
Re: Dance of the Lone Spirit
Thanks, I realized after I finished the story that Max wasn't described at all. Then I tried to cramp it all in at the end, ha! That's what I get ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Lust
Actually this whole story is a conversation between two different characters, I realize the bold. I'll try on my next story to keep it un-bold. I really appreciate that you ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: Dance of the Lone Spirit
Thanks, I was thinking about maybe adding a little background to it in another story, maybe I'll even make an alternate ending... Who really knows? I will get to work ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: Insanity
This made me worry, a lot. I think the blood screaming down one's arm was pretty well written shows that I guess causing pain is painful, like, that you know ...
Apr 1, 2013
